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vesna_86
2 months ago
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Which revision would most improve sentence 7? suggesting an alternative plan to replace the current school calendar explaining w

hy the current school calendar is outdated and inefficient expressing an opinion about those who oppose changing the calendar restating the strongest piece of evidence used to support the claim
English
2 answers:
Flura [7K]2 months ago
5 0

The modification that would enhance sentence 7 the most is the one below:

Propose an alternate plan to supersede the existing school calendar. Clarify why it is no longer suitable and inefficient. Share a viewpoint on those who resist making changes to it. Reiterate the most compelling piece of evidence backing the assertion.

Comments: The preceding paragraph includes directions for an academic task or something similar. Given that there were guidelines, it became necessary to convert the verbs from an "ing" format to an imperative form (which is intended for giving orders, commands, or directives). Adjustments to punctuation were also required: several pauses were incorporated, implemented through periods (.). To avoid excessive repetition, it was appropriate to substitute "the existing school calendar" with the pronoun "it" (third person singular) from the second mention onward.


Naddika [7.4K]2 months ago
5 0

Response:

A.) Proposing a different strategy to take the place of the existing academic calendar

Clarification:

got it right on edgenuity2020

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