A famous chocolate company have chosen you as the winner of their online competition to suggest an interesting new flavour for t
heir chocolate.the prize is a visit for you and a friend to their chocolate factory in switzeland . write an email at least 100 words and: -thank the company for choosing your suggestion as the winner
- say how you feel about the prize
-ask about dates,travel arrangements and accommodation
- ask for confirmation that your friend will also travel and stay for free
writting focus
An email asking for information and clarification
*Start the email politely
- Dear Sir or Dear Madam
*do not use
- abbreviations: thank you (must not: thanks)
-informal phrases :several, a number of (must not : lots of)
-contractions : I am (not must: I'm)
*if the first paragraph refer to the letter / email/advert you are resposing to and say why you are writing .
-thank you for your letter/emailinforming me that ../reading....
- I am could you clarify to enquire about .../ask for...
*In the main body paragraphs , use polite expressions ( e.g.indirect questions) to ask for information.
-I would (also) like to know what need to bring ...
-could I ask about the dates and times of the next course?
* If something is unclear ,ask for clarification.
- contacting you which levels are available?
-Could you confirm/explain /when/where/what/how/whether/if...?
*If the final paragraph mention that you would like a reply
-I look forward to receiving your reply soon.
-I hope to hear from you soon,
I am writing to express my gratitude for awarding me first place in your competition. I am sincerely thankful for this opportunity and for selecting my suggestion as the winner. It means a great deal to me to be invited to visit the chocolate factory in Switzerland. Chocolate is my favorite treat, and I have never traveled outside my home country, so this prize is especially exciting. I have long hoped to visit Switzerland; thank you for helping make that dream a reality. I eagerly anticipate touring your factory. Additionally, I would like clarification and confirmation on two aspects of the prize I received.
First, could you please confirm the date of my departure, the travel arrangements that have been made on my behalf, and the type of accommodation provided in Switzerland? Second, it was mentioned that I may bring a friend; could you confirm whether travel and lodging will also be provided at no cost for my guest? I look forward to your prompt and favorable reply. Thank you in advance.
Hello! I enjoy composing pieces like this, but please alter it so it reads as YOUR own work; if that is not possible, kindly mention that I was the author — apologies for any trouble...
Dear [Brand Name] Company,
I am very grateful for this enjoyable and intriguing prize! I am thrilled at the prospect of assisting you with this new opportunity to support your company. I expect this role to be both professional and enjoyable, but there are a few minor points I would like to clarify before I can fully participate.
Firstly, I would like to inquire about [your question]. This presents an issue for me; if we cannot [restate question]. I would prefer to [what and why].
Next, I regret having to ask, but could you please provide [whatever you need] (for example, further details on sales, allergies, etc.)? This information is essential because [Whatever is wrong].
Finally, [State new problem if any more are needed]. [State why].
As you can see, I am facing a small difficulty in being able to help right now. Once again, thank you very much for this exciting opportunity, and I hope we will collaborate again soon.Thank you, and I eagerly await your response.
- [Your name]
This email containing only my additions totals 185 words. I hope this is helpful!
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