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lesantik
8 days ago
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The following is a sample thesis. The underlined portion needs revision and clarity. Revise to strengthen the claim being presen

ted. "Consumers are easily fooled by advertisements because they always want more stuff and are willing to pay for it."
English
1 answer:
Gnom [7.5K]8 days ago
6 0

The right answer is as follows.

You didn’t highlight anything, but let’s refine this idea. We can clarify and enhance this part: “easily deceived”. Perhaps we can express it more formally for a thesis document.

An assertive statement is vital in thesis writing. How about modifying it to: “Consumers should shop wisely to effectively manage their finances.” This revision results in a more impactful statement instead of a mere commonplace assertion. The new thesis statement is more formal, academic, and precise.

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