This statement should be omitted from the editorial since it repeats the argument that the United States should abandon nine-month school calendars in favor of year-round schooling. Additionally, in sentence 1, it should either be (help enhance a student's achievement) or (assist students in achieving success).
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Known for its stunning views, Ghalegaun (Nepali: घलेगाउँ) sits at an altitude of 2,100 meters in the Lamjung District. It is referred to as Asia's exemplary tourism village.... The village is located around 108 km to the northwest of Kathmandu, and about 12.5 km to the northeast of Pokhara, Nepal.