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astraxan
2 months ago
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The Human Resources department is happy to announce a career development workshop led by Joseph Pelletier. He has 20 years of ex

perience in career development training and will help you gain a clearer understanding of your career goals he will also discuss tools to work toward your career goals. The workshop will take place November 10 and 11, and it will start at 9:30 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m., and there will be coffee and tea in the morning lunch will be provided in the afternoon. Respond to this e-mail to sign up because only 40 spaces are available.
How could you improve this message? check all that apply.

a. Correct comma splices.
b. Do not use simple sentences.
c. Increase sentence lengths.
d. Vary sentence types.
e. Correct fragments.
English
1 answer:
Lady bird [7.4K]2 months ago
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Response:

The accurate selections are D and E      

Clarification:

For option D, it is important to recognize that sentences are categorized based on their functions. The four most prevalent types include

  • "declarative sentence (statement)"
  • "interrogative sentence (question)"
  • "imperative sentence (command)"
  • "exclamatory sentence (exclamation)"

The author's communication heavily utilized declarative sentences, several of which have undergone alterations. Refer to 4, 5, and 6 listed below.

The reformulated sentence is presented below by employing some options as well as additional ones to enhance the clarity of the message.

The Human Resources department is pleased to announce a workshop for career development led by Joseph Pelletier, who brings two decades of expertise in career development training aimed at helping you achieve a more precise understanding of your career objectives. (1)

(2) During this training, Pelletier (3) will cover resources that will assist you in reaching your career goals. The workshop is scheduled  (4) taking place on November 10 and 11, starting at 9:30 a.m. and concluding at 5:30 p.m.. (5) Provision has been made for coffee and tea to be available in the morning, with lunch provided in the afternoon. (6) You are encouraged to register promptly since there are merely 40 slots available.

  1. Incorporating line breaks for enhanced clarity
  2. Correcting comma splices
  3. Reducing the repetitive mention of the pronoun "He"
  4. Diversity in sentence types
  5. Varying sentence structures and fixing fragments
  6. Diversifying sentence structures

Regards!

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